Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Recap No. 109, “Poet’s Choice of Words”

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Welcome to the Tanka Tuesday Poetry Recap featuring the work of poets from around the globe. If you would like to participate in this challenge, you can learn the rules on the menu item called Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Guidelines.

PLEASE NOTE: Don’t forget to count your syllables. Use this site: howmanysyllables.com. Click on the workshop tab. Then, copy and paste your poem into the box, and click “count syllables” at the bottom.

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FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK POETS!

This week brought us a political bonanza of poetry about voting and remembering those who died for our countries from around the world. I was uplifted by your words of patriotism. Not since the 1960’s has their been such a poetic outcry for and against the tierny of our governments.

Culture Trip.com shares some of the poets and poetry from that era. Have a read!

I also got several comments about how difficult it was to pick your own words! Michael, from Afterwards, had a brilliant idea. He said:

“I decided to open the nearest book and use the first word on page 58 and the last on page 101, the book was Cosmic Traitor (Perry Rhodan 26) by Kurt Brand.  The words are THOUGHTS and MILKY.  They made me think of an Astronaut…”

So here’s my Tanka Poem to remedy that situation:

Poets cry and whine

when words are not suggested,

creativity—

interrupted, lost vision

found with poetic genius!

© 2018 Colleen M. Chesebro

Each week, I like to highlight a poet who I call the Poet of the Week, who has shared an exceptional message, or shown an impassioned creativity through words or form. Poetry is all about perception, so don’t be shocked if you don’t feel the same way about a poem that I do. ❤

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This week, I’ve chosen Scott Bailey, from The House of Bailey, and his double Etheree poem: Remembrance.

Everyone has embraced the Etheree poetry form because of the syllable structure and the fluidity of words where the poet can create a meaningful message. That is the key to these forms. If you don’t have a meaningful message the poem falls flat. But, that certainly is not the case with Scott’s poem.

I especially liked how he began his poem with the word, “gone,” and how he also ended the poem with the same word, emphasizing the theme, gone but not forgotten. 

When you are writing Etheree poems it helps to think of three points that you want to emphasize in your poetry. Technically, an Etheree poem shouldn’t rhyme, although that has gained favor. If you do add rhyming words, only do one to make a specific point about what you are trying to say.

For me, in Scott’s poem, I see the first theme being blood, poppies, red, all representing the blood shed for our freedoms. The next theme is the actual remembrance of those who died for our freedoms, and the last theme is that of resisting violence and learning to get along. The ending brings us back to the overall theme of “remembrance.”

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Remembrance

Gone
The sound
The thunder
No silence reigns
And the poppies bloom
Nodding respectfully
To the brave that lay beneath
The swathe of red that remembers
The blood that was shed here for freedom
And the folly of man to his brother
So we may never forget all that pain
To ensure it will not come again
We respect them with silent thoughts
Resist any violent trends
Talk, build bridges, not walls
While the poppies bloom
While silence reigns
Honour those
That are
Gone

Image from Pixabay

By Scott Bailey © 2018

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Image Credit: QuoteFancy.com

HERE’S WHO JOINED US LAST WEEK FOR OUR 109th POETRY CHALLENGE “Poets Choice of Words”

Colleen’s weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge #haiku #tanka – Christina Herd Poems and Flash Fiction

Game | thoughts and entanglements

#Tanka Tuesday – Jane Dougherty Writes

Vote #etheree #doubleetheree | Trent’s World (the Blog)

Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge NO. 109, Happy November – “Poets Choice of Words” | willowdot21

Shiver ~ #Cinquain #PoetryChallenge | Night Owl Poetry – Dorinda Duclos

This Vote: a #TankaTuesday #tanka (11/6/18) – Frank J. Tassone

My Own Words (Tanka) | Darkness of His Dreams

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Challenge #109 – Poets Choice #MicroPoetry #Senryu | But I Smile Anyway…

Remembrance (2) – Fallen Heroes | Willow Poetry

Colleen’s Poetry Challenge – Happy November, Poet’s Choice of Words | The Showers of Blessings

News (Etheree Poem) – ethan dale eagar

Stories… | Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo

Haiku: Triumph | The Dark Netizen

Tanka Tuesday Etheree | Anita Dawes & Jaye Marie

Smorgasbord Poetry – Colleen Chesebro’s Tuesday #Poetry Challenge 109 – November – #Etheree ‘Foliage and Spectacle’ | Smorgasbord Blog Magazine

Time Change Blues – #Tanka – Let Me Tell You the Story of…

Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge Cold & Clothing | Annette Rochelle Aben

Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday: Whatever words I fancy – Afterwards

Colleen’s #Poetry Challenge – #Tanka Tuesday – Blue Wave

Tanka Tuesday – what the? | Twenty Four

Friday Fun Poetry Challenge: Discipline and Purpose (Synonyms Only) | My Corner

#Poetrychallenge – Genetic and conflict – Robbie’s inspiration

Poetry Friday & Book Launch! | The Writer Next Door|Vashti Q

November – Frost and Fire | Mucky Boots and Flawless Paws

Remembrance – thehouseofbailey

COLLEEN’S WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 109, HAPPY NOVEMBER – “POETS CHOICE OF WORDS” | M J Mallon YA/Paranormal Author

November 11 – Yesterday and today: Merril’s historical musings

World – Just a horse ride – Aweni

Brrr It’s cold and snowy here in Colorado. Happy Monday! See you tomorrow for the new challenge words! ❤

 

 

 

 

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Colleen M. Chesebro is an author of paranormal fantasy and magical realism, cross-genre fiction, poetry, and creative nonfiction. She loves all things magical which may mean that she could be experiencing her second childhood – or not. That part of her life hasn’t been fully decided yet. A few years ago, a mystical experience led her to renew her passion for writing and storytelling. These days she resides in the fantasy realm of the Fairy Whisperer where she writes the magical poetry and stories that the fairy nymphs whisper to her in her dreams. Colleen lives in Colorado with her husband. When she is not writing, she enjoys spending time with her husband. She also loves gardening, reading, and crocheting old-fashioned doilies into works of art. You can learn more about Colleen at www.colleenchesebro.com.

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