
The December 3, 2020, Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes family traditions. It can be related to any holiday or situation. How does the tradition impact the story or change the character? Go where the prompt leads! Respond by December 8, 2020.
“Family Traditions”
“Grandma, hurry up or we’ll miss the first song.” Kallie impatiently tugged at Grandma’s sleeve.
“I’m coming. Don’t rush me!” Grandma chided.
The church was packed. Typical for the Christmas Eve service.
“Kallie, I saved you seats,” whispered a voice. A few titters of laughter rumbled through the back row of pews.
“Thank you, James,” Grandma murmured as she heaved her body into the seat. Kallie blushed crimson.
James grinned. He only had eyes for Kallie. “Of course. Christmas Eve wouldn’t be the same without you both.”
The trio joined the congregation as they sang, “Silent Night, Holy Night.”
©2020 Colleen M. Chesebro

Remember the little things this year… be safe, mask up, and spread joy in the best way you can!
How lovely 😍
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Thanks, Sis ❤️
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Such a sweet story.
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Thanks, Miss Judy. I figured it was time for some Christmas magic. ❤
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Definitely needed.
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Sweet. ❤
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Trying to get back into the swing of flash fiction. LOL! 😀
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I know this ❤
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You do a good job of creating a sense of immediacy, Colleen. I can hear the choir sing.
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Thanks, Charli. I’m out of practice! My goal is to be present here every week! 🤣❤️
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Sweet, sweet Christmas magic!
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Absolutely! I could see this scene play out in my mind. ❤️
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Me too!
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Yay! I always worry about that aspect of writing. Making it believable is a good feeling. ❤️
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It’s lovely. I can even imagine writing a story in 99 words. I stop after 50k only. 🌸
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It’s a good lesson in brevity. 😍
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