First I’ll give you the haiku. The kigo is “cats in love” (neko no koi) which signifies spring.
cats in love— howls under the moon rite of spring ©2021 Colleen M. Chesebro
Let’s talk about haiga poetry. This is poetry that combines three forms: imagery, photographs or original art, and calligraphy. If you use a photo and add your haiku or senryu to it, it then becomes a haiga, subject to the rules of that form.
Haiga is written in the short-long-short syllable form or for my poetry challenge, the 5-7-5 form.
The most important part of a haiga… The image cannot complete the haiku or senryu. If you need the photo to get your message across, you’ve failed with your poem.
Remember, take the first and second lines of your haiku or senryu. Do they make sense? Then, take the second and third lines of your haiku or senryu. Do they add another layer of meaning to your poem? That is the juxtaposition you need to make your poem memorable.
Line one and two:
cats in love—howls under the moon
Line two and three:
howls under the moon, rite of spring
Each section of the haiku shares a different layer of meaning. Tell me, who hasn’t wanted to howl under the spring moon?
Now, let’s choose a photo and add our haiku:
The photo for this haiga gives us a glimpse of the moon along with a view of bare trees, signifying spring. You don’t need the photo, to understand the haiku. All the photo does is enhance the magic of the moon in springtime. Can you hear the cats howling?
Speaking of cats… the countdown has begun! On Monday, six-month-old Chloe, and four-month-old Sophie will become part of our family. They are a bonded pair we found at the Constellation Cat Cafe. We can’t wait to bring them home. ❤